By this time, we have all gained some experience of both speaking, and listening. Many of you have given an impressive effort at integrating the learnings from the classes as well as from the Lucas readings into the development of your speech performances. Well done.
As we move forward on to the next challenge--the Informative Speech--let's continue to add more layers on to the nice foundation we have set.
Your classmates will have posted 11 more tutorial videos for our benefit. While I encourage you to watch all of them at your convenience, for this blog entry, I would like you to watch 2 of them and reflect on your understanding of them.
These topics range from how you develop an informative speech for an audience, how you design an informative speech, and how you use language in different situations.
For this blog post, reflect on 2 tutorial videos from Week 5 and 6 of your choice. Describe any new learnings that you gain from these tutorials, and explain how you are integrating those learnings into your informative speech performance.
Make your first post by Sunday night. Respond to 2 classmates by class time next week.
Remember to include your ID# and Section # in your post. Aj. M
Palakorn Piyawannasuth 6329018 (Section1)
ReplyDeleteIn the first video, I watch about using language appropriately. In the beginning, I think it is a really good idea to explicitly tell the topic that will be mentioned. This will make the speech easier by knowing what will be talked about. In the first topic, it is to use the language depending on the occasion. It is to know what level of language to speak on the occasion to make sure that it will be appropriate. So, I have to make sure that I will use the language correctly in my speech on a particular topic. Next, it is to use language depending on the audience. This is to know what words are too specific which should not be used. I might have to change some words to make it more understandable. Third, using language depends on the topic. Utilizing correct language and emotion in each topic is important. Then, it is to find the most suitable style of speaking for yourselves. Finally, it is to avoid using inclusive language. Before I can give my speech, I have to know what the audiences know, what language to use, and what words are too specific. If I know all of these, I can improve my speech easily.
In the second video, I watch 'Situational Audience Analysis'. So, again, starting with the topic separation can help the audience to follow easier. Then, there are five main topics which are size, physical setting, disposition toward the topic, disposition toward the speaker, and disposition toward the occasion. So, the beginner audience size will be around 30 people. Moreover, trying to set the physical setting can help both speaker and audience more comfortable, in my opinion. I also need to know how much I can speak on a very specific topic by knowing the audience's knowledge and know how to say by knowing audience attitudes toward me and themselves. Lastly, the speech should not be too long and match with the situation. So, I might close the front light, so the slide will be clearer. In addition, I have to make sure about my time limitation and appropriation in the speech. Consequently, this will make the speech more formal and suitable for each situation.
I completely agree with the idea of explicitly tell the topic that will be talking so the audience are prepared to listen to the speech. Also, the ability to know what level of language that appropriate to use in a particular occasion is essential for speaker which including the word that should be use or avoid (technical words). Lastly, I agree that the speech should not be too long and should match with the situation.
DeleteAtikan T. section 2 (6329026)
DeleteOmar Alshawwa 6318029 (Section 2)
ReplyDeleteThe first video spoke about using language clearly. I think this topic is very important especially for us. Because most of us speaking English as a second language. And one of the most difficult part while preparing for any English presentation or speech is finding the proper words to explain our ideas. In this video I learned few tips which are going to help during preparing and presenting my informative speech next week. the first tip is to use familiar words, words that are easy to my audience to understand and avoid technical words. the tip about preparing the outline of the speech. I have to be ready to revise it few times till all the ideas are clear. Moreover, I can practice the speech with digital recorder.
The second video was the types of informative speech. The video explained about the different types of informative speech such as objective, processes, events and concepts. This helped me to select my topic for the informative speech according to these categories. Also Mr. Varit explained in the video about each category guidelines and what should be included for each category. I will use it as a guideline for me while preparing my speech outline.
Atikan T. section 2 (6329026)
DeleteI agree that one of the most difficult part of preparing for a speech is to find proper words to describe what we want to share to the audience. Familiar words or easy to understand words are what we should use for our speech so that audience can understand what we would like to share. I also agree that we should make sure that our idea is clear.
Heba Bashir ID:6318031
DeleteI agree with omar comments the easy and families words are very important part through the.presentation especially for unnative English people that will helping them to catch the topic of the presentation and encourage them to participate with speaker , furthermore the differentiate between type of topic is so important to choice suitable vecabulary for each topic according to occasion , nature of audiance...
Heba Bashir ID6318031 section 2
DeleteMd. Abdullah Al Mamun, ID: 6318028, Section: 2
DeleteI completely agree with the idea of using the language properly. Using language as second language is already a difficult task. So, we have to prepare a lot. Therefore, practicing and finding suitable words are important task too. Besides, making a interpretation of recordings to find the basic errors before we actually speak in the platform is a Good idea.
This is the reflection about using language vividly by Proud. I find it to be quite engaging since she had clearly divided each part and provided them with examples. The idea of vividly using this language can become essential to me since it is what keeps the audience’s attention. In the video, she put it mainly into two parts; Imagery and rhythm. First off, imagery is how we can use language in a way such as concrete words, simile, and metaphor to create the atmosphere that we want to interpret. Secondly, rhythm consists of another 4 main parts which are parallelism, repetition, alliteration, and antithesis. All of which is a very useful reminder to play or adjust when we are doing a public speaking.
ReplyDeleteThis is the reflection about situational audience analysis by Cartoon. This is about the situation we should concern when we do a speech. I think it is very interesting to watch since she has detailed information throughout the whole video. There are 5 parts to cover when it comes to the situation analysis. It is to look at the size of the audience, the physical setting of where the speech is being held, the disposition on topic like the audience's interest, knowledge, and attitude, the disposition on the speaker in his/her credibility, and the disposition on the occasion like what manner should be in a specific event. In sum, it is a great way to cover the concern when it comes to the speech’s situation preparation.
6329027 Anantaya L. from section2
Delete6329006 Napat Satitthummanit (section1)
DeleteI totally agree with this comment that using vivid language is really important for keeping audience's attention. Another good point is that situational audience analysis is also vital in order to understand the audience and become a good speaker.
6318031 heba bashir(section2)
ReplyDeletethe first video presented by ratchanon nanagara talk about how the presenter adapting with the audience he show very important way to how adapting with audience before and through the speaking the first adapting before start speaking is know what the speaker want to say and in the same time understand what the audience interested in to get their attention and assess them also make the presentation clear for them and appropriate its very important aim to facilitate adaptation I learn also way due to the speak if happen any technical problem such as projector show or speaker quality mention the audience to introduction with keep the eyes on them to provide the speaker in the feedback .
in the second video which talk about using language appropriately by Ant it useful to divided the language into 4 important section firstly according to occasion, secondly to the topic some topic need for description, observation ..ETC, thirdly nature of audience and lastly speaker must be himself and don not try to become someone else.
Omar Alshawwa 6318029 (section2)
DeleteI think adapting with the audience is really important for any speaker. the main aim for us is to keep the audience listening to us and do not let them feel bored. this needs to be fully prepared. a new learning also was how to act if any technical problem happened and this is very helpful point.
Md. Abdullah Al Mamun, ID:6318028, Section: 2
DeleteI agree with you. adapting with the audience is one of the most crucial part of public speaking. specially when you are someone who wants to inform your audience about something important. Everyone have to be well prepared for it & importantly to adapt with technical issues.
Nutnichaporn P. 6329008 (Section 1)
ReplyDeleteThe first one I watched is the guidelines for informative speaking, to broader my understanding about informative speech and to prepare myself for it. There're a lot of tips I got from the video, for example, do not overestimate what audience knows since normal people generally know basic idea of the topic you're talking about, a speaker should relate to audience directly by using the word you and yours in a speech, and do not be too technical by trying to avoid specific vocabulary. Most Importantly, you have to personalized your ideas. The connection between audience and your story is very necessary, as well as adding the creativity like visual aids to make it easier to listen and understand.
Next, about how to use language clearly. According to the fact that audiences come from different backgrounds, so we have to avoid misunderstanding that could occur during a speech. Firstly, you have to use familiar words as they're much easier to understand. Secondly, choosing to use concrete words rather than abstract words to be clear about the specific thing a speaker wants to talk about, it could gain your audience's attention as it's easier to recall. Lastly, a speaker have to eliminate clutter. To keep you language clean and lively, such as avoid verbal filters like "you know" and "like".
Mananchaya Punsiri 6329021 (Section 2)
DeleteI also agree with you that we should use concrete words instead of using abstract words. This is because It allows us to see the picture clearer and makes it easy to understand. It is also important to not use technical terms and use basic language that everyone can understand. I think this will make the speech more interesting and not too academic.
Hatailux Boontub 6329025 section2
DeleteI agree with you that we should use familiar words. Your speech will be easy to follow and comprehensible. By using technical language, the audience might not figure out the meaning of the word and leads to misunderstanding.
Wattanawadee Ruangvanish 6329032 (Section2)
DeleteI agree with you that we should not overestimate our audience that they know like we expected them to know and we should not be too technical since it can cause confusion to the audience. We should make it simple an as easy as possible.
6329030 Uracha Wachirawuttikai (Section 2)
DeleteI also agree with you that to make the speech clear, we should use familiar words because the audience may not know the technical term. Also, we should be specific and should eliminate clutter.
Akarapol Vichitvigrom 6329029 Section 2
ReplyDeletePlagiarism
Plagiarism is the use of another person’s language or ideas as their own. Global plagiarism is the stealing of a speech entirely from a single source and claiming that it's their own. To avoid this kind of plagiarism, we do not use only one source, and avoid doing an assignment the night before it is due. Patchwork plagiarism is the use of ideas from two or three sources and using it as if it's their own. To avoid this kind of plagiarism, just like global plagiarism, we need to work on an assignment and prepare for it thoroughly. Incremental plagiarism is the failing to give credit to the original sources used that we borrowed from other people. To avoid this kind of plagiarism, we should use quotations to mark the words of the original source, and use words such as “according to” to give credit. We can also paraphrase some and not give credit, such as the writer's basic facts. However, to paraphrase a writer’s view, we need to report the source. To avoid plagiarism from the internet, we must not copy all information from the internet. We need to take notes of the title of the document, author, the last updated date, and date we access the site, to cite it in a proper format to avoid plagiarism and to give credit where it is due.
Guideline for Informative Speech
We need to know the audience, and we must not overestimate what the audience knows. We cannot assume that they know what we are talking about, therefore, we need to explain things simply and clearly. Secondly, the topic must relate to the audience to keep the audience interested. We can keep them interested by introducing the speech with questions that start with “Have you ever…?” to create common ground and to make the audience feel relevant to the topic of the speech. Thirdly, don’t be too technical. The audience doesn’t want to learn about complex topics, we must keep things simple and straightforward and easy to understand to keep them interested and follow along the speech. Next, avoid abstractions, because the audience might not be able to relate to it. We need to use comparisons, descriptions, or contrasting ideas instead to make them picture what the speaker is trying to say. We should also personalize our ideas to dramatize the audience. We can do this by providing real life examples to help them understand, this helps the audience get out of their logical thinking and appeal to their emotions, making the speech fun and entertaining. Lastly, we need to be creative, we need to use language imaginatively to make the audience visualize what we are saying, we can also use visual aids to help this. I can use all these pointers and make an entertaining speech, and be well prepared for informative speech coming up.
Mananchaya Punsiri 6329021 (Section 2)
DeleteI think plagiarism is a problem that students and people often overlook and think that it is okay to just copy and paste without citing the sources properly or giving credit to the authors. However, it is considered a crime and unethical, so we should take it seriously and know how to avoid plagiarism.
6329031 Pakawatwong Bunluesak Section 2
DeleteI agree with you that we shouldn’t copy all information from the internet in order to avoid plagiarism of other people work and that we should also credit the sources we used in our informative speeches.
6329005 Yanon Tangmanpuwadol section1
DeleteI think the meaning of plagiarism should be understood by a widely range of people especially students, or people who work by using resources form a different places. Plagiarism could happen intentionally and accidentally. However, the consequences of this is very serious as it is considered as a crime. To avoid this, the understanding of plagiarism and different types of it should be taking in concern.
ReplyDeleteMananchaya Punsiri 6329021 (Section 2)
The first video is about the guideline for informative speech. The new learnings that I gain from this tutorial video is to not overestimate what the audience knows, this is because they may have heard or know about the topic beforehand, but not in the deeper level or in great detail. I also learned that we should avoid abstractions, try to relate the subject directly to the audience and personalize our ideas as much as we can. I will integrate these learnings into my informative speech by keeping information clear, simple, and explaining all the necessary information in detail. I will find the topic that fascinates the audience to keep them interested and use real life examples to help them understand better. It is also imperative to avoid technical terms. Instead I should use languages imaginatively, be creative, and try to use the term ‘You’ and ‘Your’ to capture audience attention.
Additionally, the second video is about using language vividly. The new learnings are to use concrete words rather than abstract words to enhance clarity and to create a picture that we can see. Simile is to use the words “like” or “as” to make comparisons. Metaphor is an implicit comparison, but not using the words “like” or “as”. Alliteration is a repetition of the first sound at the beginning of the words. For my informative speech, I plan to use concrete words to create actions, ideas and mental images, but also try not to overuse Simile because it will not benefit the speech. I believe that using vivid language will make my speech more powerful, meaningful and make the audience remember what I say better than just using ordinary words/phrases.
Hatailux Boontub 6329025 section2
DeleteI think we should not assume that the audience is familiar with the topic since they may not know the details of it. Also, personalizing the ideas is very important, and it makes your speech becomes clearer.
Omar Alshawwa 6318029 (section2)
DeleteI agree with that we should not overestimate what the audience knows. we should make the information as easier as possible for audience to listen for and understand and do not use technical words (words they may never heard before). This will help us to keep their attention during the speech.
6329030 Uracha Wachirawuttikai (Section 2)
DeleteI also agree with you that we should not overestimate the audience since they may know about the topic already. So, we need to keep it simple and easy to follow. Also, we could gain the audience’s attention by using the term “you” and “your” or we can ask them questions.
6329005 Yanon Tangmanpuwadol section1
DeleteI agree that we should not overestimate what the audience knows because if we do, it may cause miscommunication and the audience’s understandings about the speech would be decreases. Moreover, avoid the use of technical word is also an important thing to consider as most listeners are not specialize in the topics we are presented.
Sirada Sornchaitanasuk (6329024) Section 2
DeleteI really agree that we can not overestimate our audience, therefore to be prepare and keep the speech simple and clear are very important. Also I think that the trick about using You and Your in the speech are very helpful, since it can catch the audience's attention.
Atikan T. section 2 (6329026)
ReplyDeleteThe first video is “Guideline for informative speaking”. First thing that I have learnt is that do not overestimate what the audience know, the tutorial said that speaker should explain what they are talking about clearly and simply. Make sure the audience understand what you are talking about. At first I thought using the word “you” or “your” is informal, however, the tutorial said that using the words “you” and “your” will significantly increase audience attention. Also, avoid technical terms even in a general topic, try to explain it as easy to understand as possible. In addition, personalize idea of the speech by dramatize the audience in human term by using real life example or your own experiences. Lastly, creativity is important for making a great speech. From this tutorial, I will integrate these 6 tips into my informative speech. I will try to select topic that will interest the audience as well as myself so I can explain it to the audience as simple and clear as I can.
For second video, “Adapting to audience”, one of the hardest tasks for every speaker even the experienced one is to be able to see thing from other people point of view. The speaker should put him/herself into audience’s shoe by asking them self what audience need. For instance, do they need more or less detail, explanation, example or what will interest them. Anticipate how the audience will respond and be creative to think about ways to adapt your message to them. Avoid technical words and prepare visual aids to help audience understand you. Furthermore, keep in mind that during the speech, things might not go exactly like your plan, however, DO NOT PANIC. Also, always keep an eye out during your speech for audience feedback. If their expression seems ok, they might understand you but if their expression is opposite, try to explain more or go over your point again. From this tutorial, I will try to put myself into audience’s shoe by integrating questions such as what will interest my audience, what my audience will like or dislike.
6329031 Pakawatwong Bunluesak
DeleteI agree with you that we need to alway re-evaluate our audiences when we are speaking and see if they fully understood what we just explained. If their expression look blank, then we may have to go over that point again to ensure that the audience can follow through with our speech
I totally agree that we should always consider our listeners' backgrounds and opinions. By putting ourselves in their shoes, we would be able to better design our speeches to suit their interest. It is also surprising to me that I should look for the responses from my audience during the presentation. For me, it would be hard to look for those clues at the same time as when discussing a topic. However, it should help me to reflect on my speech well, so I'll try. Also, I think this will enhance eye contact.
DeleteNapat Pracharktam (6329007) Section 1*
DeleteVarit Lerdmaneepha 6329023 Section 2
ReplyDeleteUsing Language Vividly
Martin Luther King is an example of using language vividly. What he might say is short of what he says. He makes his speech more attractive by using imagery and rhythm. Imagery is the use of language to create mental images of objects, actions, or ideas. And three ways of imagery are concrete words, simile, and metaphor. Rhythm is the pattern of sound created by the choice and the arrangement of words. There are four ways to generate rhythm it is parallelism, repetition, alliteration, and antithesis. Using langue vividly can improve my speech by making my speech more attractive and more rememberable rather than simple phrases.
Guideline for Informative speech
From the videos, I have learned some tips when preparing for the speech which can be useful for the speaker and the audience. It is not just about when you are speaking. You have to start from the preparation phase. For example, when speaking the topic should be related to the listener. This will keep the audience interested and continue to listen to your speech and also always try to interact with them to keep them following with you. During the speech, the speech should not be too technical and try to avoid abstract because some audience would not be able to understand and you might lose them along the way. This will make me think wisely when preparing for the speech. Also, it makes me think what if I was the listener will I like what I talk about.
Hatailux Boontub 6329025 section2
ReplyDeleteThe first video I watched is “adapting to audience”. According to the video, there are 2 main parts including adapting before the speech and during the speech. I learned that during preparation and rehearsal, you should assess how your audience is likely to respond and adjust what you say to make it as clear as possible. During the speech, things may not go exactly as planned. Hence, do not panic. There’s always another solution. It is easier said than done, but
I believe that I can apply this to my informative speech by trying to think inside of audience’s shoes.
Using language vividly
What I got from this video is that there are 3 ways to create imagery which are choosing concrete words over abstract words, using simile introduced with the word “like” or “as”, and using metaphor which is an implicit comparison. Moreover, I will integrate this into my speech by using simile to make comparisons. By doing this, my speech will be more interesting, and easier to remember.
Wattanawadee Ruangvanish 6329032 (Section2)
DeleteI agree with you that we should pay attention to the audience reactions since it will help us know what we should do next. If they do not react like you planned, there will always be a way out for you. I think it is very helpful in real life situation.
Ratchanon Nanagara 6329022 (Section 2)
DeleteI believe that being able to adapt your speech to the audience is extremely important in making a successful speech. Furthermore, I also believe that using vivid languages would greatly contribute to making your speech more interesting and easy to understand.
Wattanawadee Ruangvanish 6329032 (Section2)
ReplyDeleteFirst video clip was Guideline for informative speech by Dear. The first idea was about giving the information to the audience. Don’t assume that they already know what you are saying, try to explain when you are talking about the topic that is not commonly talked about. The second tip was about how to grab the audience’s attention. You must find the topic that is related to the audience. You may want to start the speech with a question such as “Have you ever…?” . Another point was to not be too technical, we should be concerned with what can be explained to the audience and what can not. You should avoid technical terms and make the speech easy to catch up. Lastly, you should avoid abstraction and use real life examples to help them understand.
The second video clip was about types of informative speech by Gun. First was speeches about the object, it is the speech that focuses on the purpose of your aspect on the object. It is anything that is visible, tangible, and stable in form. The second one was speeches about processes. The speech will be about how something is done or made, for example, how The US currency is made, how to write the effective job resume. This type of speech can also be divided into two kinds. First was to help the listener understand something better. The second kind was to help the listener improve themselves. The third one was speeches about events. This type of speech was about things that happen, but you have to choose the topic wisely and pick a specific purpose. Last was speeches about concept. The topic will be about beliefs, theory, ideas, and principles. This type of speech will be more complicated than the other kind of speech.
6329006 Napat Satitthummanit (section 1)
DeleteI agree with this comment that the speaker should not assume that the audience already know about what they are saying and the topic you choose should somehow relate the the audience. I also believe that in order to deliver a good speech, the speaker should learn about types of speech, so that they know how they should prepare the speech.
Jirapat Chirachanchai 6329002 section 1
ReplyDeleteIn the first video, Adapting to the audience, I have learned that preparing for your speech alone is most of the time, not enough for you to deliver your best speech. Regardless of how well you have prepared beforehand, you will have to adapt accordingly to your audience while you are giving your speech to make it the most effective. There are a few things to bear in mind for when you are giving speeches like don’t panic, always look for facial expressions, be prepared for questions that may arise. However, there are some key things that you should be aware of when facing different situations during a speech. For example, If your prepared visual aid is not working, try to find another way to present your visual aid (using gesture, etc.), if the audience is larger than what you have expected, adjust your volume to match the size of the audience, or if the time limit is shorter, try to keep your speech short and fir in the time frame.
The second video, Using language appropriately. I have learned that when giving a speech you should use your language according to some important factors. Those factors include occasion (the language used in speaking in a classroom and in a hotel ballroom should be different.), the audience (your audience might not know, for example, technical terms, so you should be aware and avoid confusing them.), Topic (you should use language that matches your topic, for example, if the topic is technical and complicated, you need to use proper language, while, on the other hand, if the topic is straight forward, you could use straight forward language.), and lastly, speaker (you have to develop your own style of speaking and your own style of language, you should be comfortable giving your own speech and not trying to become someone else.). I also learned to avoid inclusive language.
6329014 Pin Ngenpisutsin (section 1)
DeleteI agree with this comment because it is important to adapt the speech to the audience. Even though we know who will be our audiences, it is better to flexible and knows how to adapt ourselves to situations at all times. Apart from that, it is important to use appropriate languages accordingly to the types of occasions, audiences, topics, and speakers. This helps to avoid bias and make the speech to become formal and suitable for particular circumstances.
Chinnawat Thotsaphonphaisan 6329004 section 1
DeleteI agree with this comment about adapting to the audience and the different unexpected situation. Even though we are well-prepared, an issue can occur at any time. In order to complete the speech, the speaker should be able to adapt into any situation. Jirapat nicely gave examples for things to be kept in mind and some solutions for possible problems that might happen.
6329012 Nanthasak Kanchanathipkhachorn
DeleteI agree with Jirapat as I think it is important that we use appropriate language according to the situation, occasion and the audience. You should not use words that are not related to your topic. You should also be aware of the way you speak because if you are speaking to a group of academics, then you should be more formal.
6329030 Uracha Wachirawuttikai (Section 2)
ReplyDeleteThe first video is about the guideline for informative speech. I learned many tips from watching this video. The first one is don’t overestimate what the audience knows since the audience may have knowledge about the topic. So, we need to explain briefly by keeping it simple and clear. Also, we should relate the subject directly to the audience to make the audience interested and want to know more. We might ask them questions or use the term “you” and “your” to engage the audience. Moreover, we should not make the speech too technical by avoiding technical terms abstraction. Lastly, we should personalize our idea and be creative.
The second video is about using language clearly. I learned that a good speaker should convey the message clearly by keeping the speech easy to follow and simple. To do that, we need to use familiar words because the audience may not understand the technical terms. Moreover, we should choose concrete words since they are more specific and are less likely to misinterpret. For example, the word basketball is more specific than the word physical activity. Lastly, we should eliminate clutter by keeping the language clean, lively, and avoid flappy phrases.
Ratchanon Nanagara 6329022 (Section 2)
DeleteFirst of all, I believe that the different tips from the 'guideline for informative speech' video will be extremely beneficial when planning for this upcoming speech next week. In addition, I also believe that by using language clearly, the audience will be able to understand our speech better which will improve the quality of the speech.
6329031 Pakawatwong Bunluesak Section 2
ReplyDeleteThe first video i watched was about how to use language appropriately. I learned that there is four main factors that I should take into account when adjusting my language to suit the speech. These four factors are the occasion,audiencs,topic and speaker. I can apply what I learned in this video into my informative speech by thinking about the four factors when I am writing my speech and I would be avoid using the phrases such as you guys or slangs.
The second video I watch was the video tutorial about guidelines for informative speech. There were many takeaways from this tutorial. Examples of the takeaways are as a speaker we should always try to relate the subject directly to the audience by using the words you and your can really help. We should also use comparisons and contrast to help describe what you are talking about. I can apply what I leaned in the video by try to be more inclusive with my use of language by using more you and your.
6329017 Pribdao Charumattanont
DeleteUsing language for the right occasion is very important because not only will it be apporpriate but the audience can understand more as well. I also agree that you have to use comparisons when youre speaking.
Ratchanon Nanagara 6329022 (Section 2)
ReplyDeleteFrom the “Guideline for Informative Speech” video, I have learnt many different tricks that would help me succeed in making an informative speech. First of all, we should never overestimate the audience’s knowledge; we should not assume that they will know what we are talking about. In addition, we should also relate the subject directly to the audience in order to increase their attention and understanding. Furthermore, it is a great idea to avoid technical terms so that our speech will be straightforward and easy to catch up. Using the different tricks from this tutorial, I strongly believe that the overall quality of my informative speech will greatly improve and that the audience will be able to understand and relate to my speech more.
From the “Using Language Vividly” video, I have learnt the different language tools that we, as speakers, can use. The first one is imagery: speakers can use vivid languages to create mental images of objects, actions, or ideas. Some ways of implementing imagery into our speech include using concrete words, simile, and metaphor. The next tool we can use is rhythm which help enhances flow and meaning of our speech. The fours ways to generate rhythm include parallelism, repetition, alliteration, and antithesis. To implement these language tools into my speech, I will try to use multiple imageries and rhythms in order to enhance the audience's understanding and to improve the flow of my speech.
I agree with this comment because we have to use different language tools in order for the audience to visualize what the speaker is saying and by using metaphors and similes you are able to compare it to easier objects that the audience can understand.
Delete6329017 Pribdao Charumattanont
DeleteI agree with this comment because we have to use different language tools in order for the audience to visualize what the speaker is saying and by using metaphors and similes you are able to compare it to easier objects that the audience can understand.
DeleteTisthong Charoonmethee (Mega) 6329009 Section1
I agree that it is incredibly necessary to be able to tailor your voice to the audience in a good speech. In addition, I also suggest that you use multiple imageries and rhythms to increase the comprehension of the viewer and improve the flow of your voice.
Phornrawin Wongkarnjanapanich 6329016 Section 1
ReplyDeleteThe first video I watched was “Guidelines for Informative Speaking”. It was a topic about the steps you should follow when having an informative speech. First of all, you should explain the details thoroughly. Audiences may only know the general idea of the topic, so you should not overestimate what the audiences know and assume they understand everything. Secondly, I learned that using pronouns such as “you” and “yours” help audiences have a closer understanding of the speaker’s ideas (they could relate more). Thirdly, you should use descriptive language and avoid abstractions. Tell the story as if the audience is with us when the events happen. By integrating this new information, I could have an idea on the range of topics I should choose. The speech should not bore audiences, and it should be creative in terms of the languages used and the personal story behind.
The second video, “Using language clearly”, refers to the method of choosing the right word choices in a speech. I learned that instead of using technical words, we should use familiar words so audiences can understand more precisely of either the process or to generally grasp the idea of what you are presenting. Furthermore, when discussing a certain topic, try to describe it specifically or else it will come off as being too vague. Lastly, try to eliminate clutter because it will make your phrases seem redundant and the audience may find it hard to understand. To integrate this learning into my informative speech, I will try reading it out loud and remove any redundant or unnecessary word phrases. This will make the speech seem more straightforward to the points.
DeleteTisthong Charoonmethee (Mega) 6329009 Section1
I absolutely agree with this comment. Using clear vocabulary is required to be a better speaker. Clear terms and messages provide clear dialogue and connection between the speaker and the listener. When the speaker uses clear and general vocals, it helps the listener to understand the subject and to follow it quickly.
Panchai Limninart 6329013 Section 1
DeleteI agree that we should use familiar words so audiences can understand more of the idea. We also should avoid using clutter because we should make our speech straightforward as much as possible.
Thidaporn Ratarsa 6329011 Section 1
DeleteI agree with this comment. We should explain the details to our topic because the audience may know only the general idea of the topic. But it is interesting that by using pronouns like "you" and "yours", it help audiences have a closer understanding of the speaker’s ideas.
Pipatra Tirapairojana (6329019) Section 1
DeleteI strongly agree with this comment. We should use familiar words to help audiences understand more clearly on what we are trying to say. Also, it is better to describe in precise when talking about a particular topic. This will help audiences understand better about the context we are trying to say.
6329017 Pribdao Charumattanont
ReplyDeleteThe first video that I watched is called using language appropriately. I learnt that before you proceed to give a speech, you need to be acknowledged with the occasion and who your audience members are. By knowing what the occasion is, you are able to use the right body language, tone, voice, information presented more appropriately. With knowing the audience, you are able to pick up vocabulary that they are familiar with or even their field of interest so your speech becomes more attractive. You have to learn how to avoid inclusive language. Inclusive language is the language that avoids the use of certain expressions or words that might be considered to exclude particular groups of people. If the topic is more technical, then you need to use different vocabs to portray your topic to be factual and believable.
The second video that I watched is about using clear language. In order to become a good speaker in front of an audience, a clear message should be conveyed and you have to keep the speech easy and simple for the audience to follow through. IN order to do this, like Mr. Matthew gave an example in class, we should use vocab that is easy for the audience to understand so they can follow on what were about to say in the speech. These words include concrete words. this is because they are specific and won't be easily misinterpreted. Eliminating clutter is also very important. This means you need to keep the language clean and avoid phrases that are too condensed.
I agree with this comment that in order to become a good speaker, using clear language is very important. Clear words and message create clear communication and connection between speaker and audience. When the speaker use simple and general vocal, it allows audience to understand and easily follow the topic.
Delete*6329028 Arissara Kannasombat
DeleteChinnawat Thotsaphonphaisan 6329004 section 1
DeleteI strongly agree with Pribdao about using language appropriately. Acknowledging what the occasion is and who your audience members are will greatly affect your speech. Speakers must choose a proper word choice for their audience. Also, inclusive language is something a speaker should be aware of in order to avoid misunderstandings and conflicts.
6329013 Panachai Limninart Section 1
ReplyDeleteThe first video i watched was about how to use language appropriately. We need to think about 4 things that are occasion, audience, topic and speaker. If I am the speaker of a formal event I should avoid using the word you guys or slang. For the audience I should not use off color humour or profanity. For Topic I should choose the word that matches with my topic. Lastly for the audience I should be comfortable giving my own speech and not trying to become someone else.
The second video is about the informative speech guideline. This video taught me a lot of useful information. The first is to not overestimate what the audience knows, as the audience might already be familiar with the subject. As a result, we must clarify briefly while remaining concise and straightforward. We can also clearly relate the topic to the audience in order to pique their curiosity and make them want to learn more.
Napat Pracharktam (6329007) section 1
DeleteI totally agree that occasion, audience, topic and speakers are the 4 very important aspects to consider. I think for our presentation this time, because we are delivering a speech to our friends we can be less formal, to create a relaxing atmosphere, while still respecting our friends. Also, we can also be funny sometimes, so our friends enjoy listening to the speech.
6329006 Napat Satitthummanit (Section 1)
ReplyDeleteThe first video I watched is about plagiarism. I learned that there are 3 types of plagiarism that can affect you negatively if it was caught. First, Global Plagiarism is when you steal a speech from a single source and make it your own which often happen when we don’t have enough time to prepare the speech. Second, patch work plagiarism is when you steal a speech or ideas from couple sources and make it as your own. Third, incremental plagiarism is when you fail to give credits to the sources. To avoid plagiarism, we should start early and be prepared. Always give quotation to the source by using “according to” or “says”. Do not forget that when paraphrasing, we still need to give credit to the source. Finally, Keep in mind that citation is a speaker’s ethical responsibility.
The second video I watched is about using language appropriately. We need to use words that are suitable for occasions, audience, topic and speaker. There are things that we need to be careful because some words can hurt the listener’s feeling such as off-color words and profanity. And also the special vocabularies should change depend on the audience. For the speaker, we should try to find you own style. From this video, I learned that I have to be more aware of using generic pro nouns like “he” (use they instead) or the words that end with “man”(use person). Moreover, we should use appropriate groups name that they use identify themselves, for example, use gay men or lesbians instead of homosexuals.
6329014 Pin Ngenpisutsin (section 1)
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I agree with this comment because plagiarism is about copying other ideas. Even though sometimes we, as the speakers, think that it is not important to cite or give references in all parts of speech, in fact, it is in order to show respect and increase credibility. And for the second video, I also agree with you on the point that it is important to use appropriate words to avoid hurting the audiences’ feelings as well as showing respect to other people who are mentioned by the speakers.
6329014 Pin Ngenpisutsin (section 1)
ReplyDeleteThe first video I watched is about the types of informative speech. There are 4 types of it and each of them emphasizes a different point. Therefore, the video helps me to focus on the right point to suit my informative speech. This will help avoid confusion for me during the speech in order to inform the audience on the point I actually focus on and increase the clarity in a way that which part of the information I try to explain to the audiences.
The second video, I watched is the appropriate use of languages. In order to speak an informative speech, it obviously needs to speak formally. However, the video teaches me to focus to use plural pronouns in order to maintain equality between men and women. Moreover, the words used are also important. It is better to use more general and polite words to show respect towards others; using disabled people is better than using handicapped people. This helps me to keep in mind during the planning and practicing speaking about using the right and formal speech and avoid using inappropriate language uses.
I agree with this comment that the way speaker using appropriate languages is very important in the speech. Although we need to use formal words and language, concerning about general and polite is also important. Therefore, speaker's word choice is a crucial part to concern before making an informative speech
Delete* 6329028 Arissara Kannasombat
DeletePanachai Limninart 6329013 Section 1
DeleteI agree that we should focus on the right point to suit our informative speech. When we understand the point we can explain to point more precisely. Moreover, clarifying the part of information really help audience understand more of topic.
6329028 Arissara Kannasombat
ReplyDeleteThe first video I watched is about a guideline for informative speech. In the video, speaker shared many suggestions and how to develop informative. For example, do not overestimate what the audience knows as we cannot assume that they will not or not know what we are talking about; hence, try to keep simple and clear. In addition, the most important suggestion would be do not be too technical like avoiding technical words and keep it straightforward and easy so the audience can easily understand the topic we are talking about although they have not heard about it before. Also, personalize the idea by putting some real life example to help the audience understand. From this tutorial video, it is very useful to guide me how to develop my speech and things that I need to concern about so that I can put some of examples and changing some script to be more easier and simple to follow.
The second video I watched is about the plagiarism. The video taught me what is plagiarism and different types of it. For example, Patchwork plagiarism is the way one stealing a idea or words from two or more than three sources and passing them off as one’s own. Also, a global plagiarism which is about stealing one’s speech from a single source and made to be one’s own. Since we need a research for our informative speech, plagiarism is a important part we need to concern. Hence, knowing many types of it helps me to avoid plagiarism in my own speech and also how to personalize or change our speech or words to be in our own ways.
Chanisara K. 6329003 Sec 1
DeleteIt is true that we should try to keep things simple as we have no clue on how much the audience knows about the subject. To do this, we, as speakers, should avoid using technical terms. As for plagiarism, taking words from different sources and combining them to make it sound like your own can be classified as patchwork plagiarism. When researching information on your own topic, it is crucial to avoid doing so.
Tisthong Charoonmethee (Mega) 6329009 Section1
ReplyDeleteThe first video discusses the guideline for informative speech. There are many tips from watching this video. First is not overestimating what the audience understandings, as the audience will also have knowledge of the topic. So, we need to clarify it briefly, keeping it quick and straightforward. We should also guide the topic to the audience in order to make the audience curious and want to hear more about it. We could ask them questions or use the term "you" and "your" to engage the audience. Finally, we need to personalize our concept and be innovative.
The second video I watched was about plagiarism. There are three forms of plagiarism that, once detected, may have serious consequence. Firstly, when you take a speech from a particular source and call it your own, which happens often when you don't have enough time to plan the speech, you are committing global plagiarism. Secondly, patchwork plagiarism is when you snatch a speech or ideas from a couple of sites and call them your own. Third, incremental plagiarism is where you forget to allocate credits to the author. Therefore, we should plan ahead and be prepared to avoid plagiarism. Often use "according to" or, "says" to quote the source. Don't forget that we still need to give credit to the source while paraphrasing.
6329012 Nanthasak Kanchanathipkhachorn
DeleteI think its true that we should not overestimate the audience's knowledge and keep our information brief and simple. We can never know for the sure the background of all the people that will we listening to us so I think its important that we say the things that all people of all age would be able to understand.
6329012 Nanthasak Kanchanathipkhachorn
ReplyDeleteThe first video that I watched was the situational audience analysis made by Jirapat. What I learned was the size of the audience really affects how you should perform--formal or informal. The physical settings also plays a part; like the size of the room, or the temperature in such. Lastly, it is important that you know your audiences' background and their common interest so that you'll know the intensity at which you should perform.
The second video that I watched was using language clearly made by Pat Napat. The three major ideas were to use familiar words, choose concrete words, and eliminate clutter. Firstly, use familiar words, it is essential to use words that your audience can easily understand. If your terms are too technical or difficult, then the audience will not be able to perceive the idea you are trying to tell them. Keep it short, sharp, and simple. Secondly, use concrete words, concrete words will help your audience to visualize what you are talking about. Concrete words are usually more specific than abstract words. Lastly, eliminate clutter, avoid cluttering. Avoid verbal filters and avoid using redundant, unnecessary, and flabby words or phrase.
Varit Lerdmaneepha 6329023 Section 2
DeleteThe amount and types of the audience are very important to how your speech is going to be. Also with the setting, it drives the mood of the speech as well. So try to choose a setting and type of audience where it suits your speech.
Pipatra Tirapairojana (6329019) - Section 1
ReplyDeleteThe first video I watched was about using language vividly. The video discusses on two important ways to use language creatively which are imagery and rhythm. From watching the video, I have picked up few ways to enhance my informative speech through the use of words. I could improve my speech by using descriptive words, alliteration, simile, and metaphor to grab audience’s attention. I also learn that I could strengthen my message through my word choice and the arrangements I made.
The second video I watched teaches about the guidelines for informative speaking. From the video, I realized that I can’t overestimate what my audience know. Therefore, I have to take into consideration to relate the subject of my speech to the audience. I have to be clear in delivering my message and avoid using jargons. Most importantly, the lesson I learn which could help improve my speech is to personalize my topic by putting in real-life examples to get my audience involved. Lastly, adding creativity such as visual aids could help audiences imagine better on the topic I am trying to deliver.
Chanisara K. 6329003 Sec 1
DeleteI agree that using language to creatively express your point can be done with imagery and rhythm. Word choice and how you arrange your sentence can also have a great impact on your speech. To make your speech more relatable, you should add some real-life examples.
Thidaporn Ratarsa 6329011 Section 1
DeleteI totally agree with this comment. We cannot overestimate wha our audiences know and have to avoid using jargons. By adding visual aids, it would help the audiences imagine and understand the topic further.
Napat Pracharktam (6329007) Section 1
ReplyDeleteFrom the Lucas Tutorial Video on “Guidelines for informative speaking”, I have learnt some tips that would get my audience involves in my speech. Firstly, one way of grabbing the listeners’ attention is to talk about the point from their side, such as by using the word ‘you’ or ‘yours’. It is important to note that this is because they would obviously want to listen to topics that are related to them. Secondly, avoid using technical terms, but instead I should put them into simple and clear words and descriptions with examples. Then, I learnt that abstraction should be avoided in this type of speech. Instead, I could describe external events and internal feelings using concrete words, so the audience would feel like they are in the same situation with us. Lastly, I should use real-life examples and personal terms. For my own informative speech, I would be sure to describe the scene in the bts sky train clearly so my audience can experience the same feeling that I do. Moreover, I should design carefully how I will explain about deafness so that my audience would understand how deaf people feel.
From the Lucas Tutorial Video on “Audience Centeredness”, I just learnt the two very important vocabularies to my speech: audience centeredness and identification. Firstly, to be audience-centered is to always consider the audience during speech preparation and presentation. Then, identification is to connect to your audience by underlining your common goals, values and experience. To be more precise, a strong method would be to show your empathy and respect towards your listeners regardless of the difference in opinions. All in all, I should always prioritize my audience’s background of interest and knowledge, such as how much do my audience know about a sign language. In addition, I should also consider my audience’s perception towards my topic, so I can make it more interesting to them.
Sirada Sornchaitanasuk (6329024) Section 2
DeleteI also think that to set the audience- centered are very important to every speech. It is not only to get the audience attention, it also show our professional preparation for each speech. If any speaker lack of this skill, it will lead to a very boring and disrespect speech.
6329005 Yanon Tangmanpuwadol section 1
ReplyDeleteIn the first video, I watched about using language clearly, which is one of my topic of interest. The video mainly explain the three aspects that should be followed which are 1.) Use familiar words 2.) choose concrete words (the more specific the word is = being more concrete ) 3.) Eliminate clutter. These tips should be used to avoid misunderstandings as people come from different backgrounds and react to things differently. Moreover, the video taught us to use sharp words that is not too technical and avoid verbal filters such as ‘you know’, ‘like’, and ‘really’. Lastly, we should make the listener understand the meaning immediately and correctly, so keep practicing and record the video of yourself talking will be very useful as it significantly increases our performances. These learnings can be integrated in my informative speech by knowing what words should I use, and what should I avoid, to make my speech more effective and interesting.
The second video is about plagiarism which is very easy for people to misunderstand the concept. It is to present another person’s language or ideas and presented it as your own and this has huge consequences such as damage to your career, expulsion from school, or crime. There are mainly 3 types of plagiarism which are Global, patchwork, and Incremental. To avoid this, we should be careful when using information from the resources, always give credit, and don’t forget to cite the source. For me, plagiarism is a very serious problem that can easily occur both accidentally and intentionally. This video helps me to always concern about this problem and use information carefully. Moreover, the problem of plagiarism should be educated for people and students so they would be aware about the cause and consequences.
Sirada Sornchaitanasuk (6329024) Section 2
ReplyDeleteAccording from the video about 'Plagiarism' by Stella. I think this video is very beneficial because plagiarism is one of the most common mistake that many people overlook. I am one of them. A bunch of informations on the internet are coming from everywhere in the world, so we should respect the owner and ourselves by following the right manner. This video is presented 3 different types of plagiarism. First type is the Global plagiarism, it is when they copy the entire text from a single source without any paraphrase. Second type is the Patchwork plagiarism, this is when they combine a couple sources together by using their idea or language and pass it as their own. Lastly, the Incremental plagiarism is when they do not give the credit to the sources that they are using. However, if the information is the basic fact, it this case the credit is not necessary. To avoid all of this problems, the first thing is to start working as soon as possible, do not leave until last minute, because you might easily make mistake. Also, keep in mind to put the title of the document, the author or organisation, the last updated dare, and the date you accessed the site for the citation.
The second video that I found it very helpful for my speech is 'Using language vividly' by Proud. I think to speak with the creative language will help getting the audience's attention and increasing their interested. I always have no idea how to make my speech sound smoother and fancier. However, in this video, she gives some tips to play with the word and make it more vivid. First is the imagery by using the concrete word, simile, and metaphor to create the mental image and help the audience's understanding. Next is to play with rhythm such as parallelism, repetition, alliteration, and anthesis to make my speech smoother, easy to listen and follow along. These trick will definitely help me improving my word from the boring speech to the vividly one.
Jirapat Chirachanchai 6329002 Section 1
DeleteI also think 'Using language vividly' video is very helpful to me too as I can apply the tips given in the video to my own speech easily and effectively. It also made me aware of which aspect of speaking I am lacking and need to improve.
Chanisara K. 6329003 Sec 1
ReplyDeleteSituational audience analysis breaks down into 5 factors: size, physical setting, disposition towards the topic, speaking, and occasion. I have learned that the physical setting can actually have a profound impact on how willing the audience is to listen to the speaker. Even if the settings are completely out of your control, you can still adjust yourself to make yourself seem much more interesting. It is also important to take how much the audience knows about the chosen topic into consideration because they will find topics that they have some background knowledge about more appealing. As the speaker, your audience is likely to have a certain expectation about you and it is crucial for us to make an estimation of what it is. Lastly, preparing your speech to match the theme of the occasion is what would make your speech successful.
The second video I chose to watch is about using language clearly. It breaks down into 3 main points, which are: use familiar words, choose concrete words, and eliminate clutter. Using familiar words refers to avoiding big words or words that are technical because that could cause confusion for the audience. It is better to stick with simple words as that would still get the message across. Concrete words are words that are less abstract, which makes them much more persuading and clear. As for eliminating clutter, it is better that we do not make our sentences too wordy because that would mean that the listeners would have to put in more effort to understand what you are trying to convey. There is literally no point in cluttering.
Thidaporn Ratarsa 6329011 Section 1
ReplyDeleteThe first video I watched was about situational audience analysis. It revolves around five important factors which are size, physical setting, disposition toward the topic, disposition toward the speaker, and disposition toward the occasion. I have learnt that the larger the audience, the more formal your speech should be. Also for the physical setting, it can influence your audiences' willingness to accept your idea or to listen to you. However, if we cannot control the setting, we can still make ourselves as interesting as possible to keep the audience engaged.
The next video I watched is plagiarism. I learnt that the most unforgivable case is global plagiarism. It is when stealing a speech entirely from a single source and passing it off as one's own. So an example would be a student is doing her work at the last minute, and she decides to download a speech from the internet written by her friend, and then calls her own. Another type of plagiarism is patchwork plagiarism, which is when you take information from two or three sources and pass it off as your own. However, copying from three different sources is just as much of a plagiarism as copying from a single source.
Pipatra Tirapairojana (6329019) Section 1
DeleteI totally agree with this comment that plagiarism is an unforgivable action when writing a piece of work. Stealing other people's work and claiming it as one's own is not acceptable. Therefore, we should refrain ourself from taking or copying information and passing it off to ourselves. Also, I think we should provide citation to the information to avoid plagiarism when taking information from different sources.
Phornrawin Wongkarnjanapanich 6329016 Section 1
DeleteIt's interesting how it's not only the content that will engage the speaker, but the setting also plays a role in the audiences' willingness to accept your speech. It is important to get a grab of the size of your audience, since the bigger it is, the more formal your speech should be. The speaker's attitude toward the topic, audience, and the occasion also influence the success of his or her speech. Therefore, one should not be bias and should act professional.
Chinnawat Thotsaphonphaisan 6329004 section 1
ReplyDeleteThe first video I watched was "plagiarism". After I have finished watching this video about plagiarism. I have learned that plagiarism can be identified into The speaker clearly explains and distinguishes between all cases of plagiarism three different cases of plagiarism. At the same time, the solutions for each case of plagiarism and the examples of each case are provided. Moreover, he also shows the worst case for each case of plagiarism. And in the final section of the video I have learned how to avoid plagiarism. Sometimes we might not intended plagiarize from the source, but there will be penalties for doing such an action anyway. Hence, we should be aware of our actions before we get in trouble. This video helps us to increase the awareness that was mentioned.
The next video I watched was "Using Language Appropriately". I have learned that what and who I should use appropriate language to. The speaker mentioned four aspects; occasion, Audience, Topic and Speaker. The speaker gives advices on how to language appropriately for each aspect. Then, the speaker mentioned "The Inclusive Language". It is the language that does not stereotype people by any factors such as gender, sexual orientation, race, religion or any disabilities. To me, the inclusive language in very important, especially in todays world where everyone seeks for equality. Using the inclusive language may avoid any type of discrimination that can potentially lead to conflict.
Varit Lerdmaneepha 6329023 Section 2
DeleteI agree with him because nowadays plagiarism can be very easy and sometimes we didn't mean to. So we have to be careful when using other's information and we have to learn how to cite it properly.
Phornrawin Wongkarnjanapanich 6329016 Section 1
DeleteI strongly agree that plagirism is often used without the author's awareness, often in English essays. It could be a heavy punishment since plagirism is basically copying and using other people's ideas. Therefore, we should be careful in citing and intepreting it into our own words to avoid plagirism.
Jirapat Chirachanchai 6329002 Section 1
DeleteI also learned the same thing from the "Using language appropriately" video. And I strongly agree that the inclusive language is very important for know to be aware of and for one to use in order to avoid conflicts.
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